Wednesday, 24 February 2010

Pre Production Documentation and Report

The pre production tasks we had to compleate for example the story board, shot list, treatment, questionnaires and risk assessments were finished before we filmed, this helped us time wise. Although we had problems with the original place we had first chosen so we therefore had to adapt the shot list and story board several times due to this. The risk assessment had to be changed once to show we were filming in exterior instead of interior.



Script.
Justice

Scene 1:

Three youths named Bazza, Jeremy and Norman Briggs (the Leader) are running away from a bland looking building. Jeremy and Bazza are lagging slightly behind Norman. Jeremy suddenly pulls up patting his pockets. Bryan stops with him.

Bazza
What ya doing?

Jeremy
I’ve dropped my phone en I

Bazza (Pulling Jeremy along)
Fuck it lets move

They run past the camera.

Scene 2
The Detective (Bobbie Ensbury) is inside the building surveying the scene whilst a member of the forensic team (Terry) is taking pictures of the crime scene. Eddie is dead on the floor, he’s covered in blood. On a scale of one to dead he scores pretty highly. The detective paces.

Terry (Setting down his camera)
Estimated time of death between five and five thirty this morning.

Detective
Cause of death?

Terry
He was severely beaten, but I think the blow that killed him was this one to the left temple
(Terry bends down to point to a wound on EDDIE’s head)

Detective (wincing)
Fuck me

Terry
I know. It’s one of the worst I have ever seen

Detective
I’ve seen worse

Enter Dave, running holding a phone.
Dave
Ensbury, look what I’ve found

Detective
That’s detective Ensbury to you, I’m in charge of this investigation.

Dave
One of the attackers dropped a phone…

Detective snatches phone

Dave
…And it’s got a video on it. I don’t think you should watch it though it’s pretty…rough

Detective
I can handle it

Detective starts watching film
Camera goes into the phone and shows how the murder came about before. The four youths enter the house; the 3rd is holding the camera phone. Eddie is in the toilets looking scared.

Norman Briggs (to Eddie)
Wakey Wakey sunshine

BAZZA
You thought you could hide from us did ya treacle

Norman Briggs
You weren’t gonna pay us were you

EDDIE
I was I was I promise just give me time

JEREMY
Times up son

NORMAN BRIGGS
This is a reminder not to mess with us

They all start beating Eddie up, yelling and whooping; eventually they manoeuvre him to the floor. Norman Briggs straddles him and starts punching him about the face. The boys go quiet, only Norman is still shouting.

JEREMY
Leave him he’s had enough

Norman carries on regardless until they hear the sound of a police siren in the distance. The boy’s stiffen

JEREMY
What’s that?


BAZZA
Crikey it’s the rozzers

NORMAN BRIGGS
Scarper

They run from the room through the fire escape while Eddie lies motionless by the door . As soon as they get outside, Jeremy turns off the camera.

SCENE 3
Back inside the toilet the Detective is holding the phone. Her face is impassive but the two forensic people gathered ‘round are visibly shaken

TERRY
What does it all mean?

DETECTIVE
There’s been a murder, and I know how to solve it!

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